tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post7336144490563089671..comments2023-09-25T21:50:28.879+08:00Comments on Sean Pan: 愛情, 學著看開一點Sean Panhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05478901373416289809noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-11012971582061983972007-09-28T01:52:00.000+08:002007-09-28T01:52:00.000+08:00也許講的是我, 也許不是. 一切都不一定要說的很清楚. 最重要的是希望讀者可以深入其境的感覺哪個人當...也許講的是我, 也許不是. 一切都不一定要說的很清楚. 最重要的是希望讀者可以深入其境的感覺哪個人當時的情感. 希望我有做到這一點. 很感謝妳的留言, 希望妳可以繼續回來閱讀.Sean Panhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478901373416289809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-4652317532263570272007-09-28T00:27:00.000+08:002007-09-28T00:27:00.000+08:00一開始以為是在說你自己的愛情..最後你卻說是虛構的..感覺不太像虛構的..因為描述的很有感覺..應該...一開始以為是在說你自己的愛情..<BR/>最後你卻說是虛構的..<BR/>感覺不太像虛構的..因為描述的很有感覺..<BR/>應該說故事是虛構的..<BR/>情感卻是真實的...'(我猜的啦)..<BR/>不過..<BR/>有時道理大家都知道..要做到卻很難..<BR/>要看開一點真ㄉ很難..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-3477634179856814032007-09-10T07:03:00.000+08:002007-09-10T07:03:00.000+08:00謝謝你的建議跟鼓勵. 對於這篇愛情散文, 算是第一次對自己挑戰的樣的寫作. 不知道效果是怎樣, 也不...謝謝你的建議跟鼓勵. 對於這篇愛情散文, 算是第一次對自己挑戰的樣的寫作. 不知道效果是怎樣, 也不知道有沒有讓我的讀者深受其境. 如果說, 大家有認同感的話, 那我相信我已經做到我想要寫出的效果. 希望大家可以給我鼓勵這樣我才有繼續寫出好作品的原動力.Sean Panhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478901373416289809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-25482404168530764602007-09-10T06:41:00.000+08:002007-09-10T06:41:00.000+08:00對感情的描寫很真實,尤其是等電話那段,估計有過戀愛經歷的人都深有感觸,如果不是妳自己的親身經歷的話,...對感情的描寫很真實,尤其是等電話那段,估計有過戀愛經歷的人都深有感觸,如果不是妳自己的親身經歷的話,那妳真是太善于觀察和體驗生活勒。寫的不錯,keep writing...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-44750549444202328752007-09-09T20:34:00.000+08:002007-09-09T20:34:00.000+08:00也許在某方面裡面的"我"可能真的跟我自己很相似. 也許整個劇情是從某件事件改編的. 一切都是有可能的...也許在某方面裡面的"我"可能真的跟我自己很相似. 也許整個劇情是從某件事件改編的. 一切都是有可能的. 只是如果從整個故事來看的話, 其實是虛構的. 我寫這個短篇的用意就是來測試一下自己的寫作能力. 從來沒寫過散文, 希望這樣的散文會有人有興趣繼續看下去.Sean Panhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478901373416289809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-34029338695566970182007-09-09T07:21:00.000+08:002007-09-09T07:21:00.000+08:00看到最后,原来是虚构的角色和剧情,真是晕倒了!当中的“我”居然不是西恩本人啊?Anyway,感情就是...看到最后,原来是虚构的角色和剧情,真是晕倒了!当中的“我”居然不是西恩本人啊?<BR/>Anyway,感情就是如此,没办法轻易在争取和放弃之间作出选择。Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-24743521239191084122007-09-08T22:48:00.000+08:002007-09-08T22:48:00.000+08:00Thanks. I tried to keep the setting within one yea...Thanks. I tried to keep the setting within one year period. As for the "咕...嚕...! 咕...嚕...! 咕...嚕...!", the sound never entered into my mind that is going to be a distraction to my reader. I will look into that for sure. Thanks for your comment. Please do keep on reading my blog because readership is what drives me on writing this blog.Sean Panhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478901373416289809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179333493516806842.post-68363685143054020122007-09-08T22:42:00.000+08:002007-09-08T22:42:00.000+08:00It's all pretty good until you use "咕...嚕...! 咕......It's all pretty good until you use "咕...嚕...! 咕...嚕...! 咕...嚕...!". The human biological sound doesn't fit the litterature very well. Also, the word "新光幫,楊宗煒" will let your reader be able to place your writing to first half of 2007 (cuz that's when they started getting famous), which i don't think is a good idea. The timeline of a writing should always be fuzzy(2-5 years) to the reader, to increase the mysterious nature.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com